…”Not as I do.” Your mother, father, or other caretaker must have told you this so many times your ears flapped closed and your brain took off to Never Never Land. Mine did.
Now I’m forced to suggest to my readers who are writers that you do just that. As I say, not as I do.
Here’s “I say” Number One: Before you begin your novel, should you decide to do so (and what more appropriate month than November, the month of NaNoWriMo), have the end in mind. In fact, write that chapter first, if you can. Write an outline, as sketchy or as detailed as your personality type and writing style allows. If you protest that you’re a pantster who writes by the seat of your pants with your imagination guiding, and simply cannot create an outline, I suggest that you write down and know well the major plot points of the book and how you, your protagonists and the entire supporting cast of characters might possibly make it to the Promised Land that is the climax and the ending of your novel.
Some people use storyboarding, little boxes with scenes in them. Some people draw the three or four main sections of the novel (acts) on a large sheet of paper, with a line that dips and peaks with the action, and the scenes that lead to those peaks jotted beneath the line. Some people make note cards with each scene, with a different color for each character.
“I say” Number Two: Have in mind a reasonable word count for your novel and STICK TO IT. You know how long your chapters generally run. Utilize those math skills and multiply. Especially if you write genre fiction, length counts. (And I’m not talking erotica!)
Do not, alas, be faced with serious reconstructive surgery just when you think you’re nearing the end of a long, tedious, yet joyful process.
That is what I’m undergoing with my current novel. This novel has been a learning journey, where I have learned to add emotional complexity and tension to each page. That also adds words. A better plot outline, referred to more often, would have helped me “avoid the knife.” And saved time and emotional energy.
How do you plan your writing? Have you ever encountered a problem similar to mine, needing serious revisions? What did you do?

14 comments:
Kathy:
I have never completed a novel, so I'm probably talking out of school. However, I agree with your points. Of the books I have started I used an outline for one, and a sort of storyboard for the other. And, believe it or not, I'm not using either for the one I'm currently working on. It's a free for all. So, even though I don't possess a finished novel, I still feel that I've been around the block. This is what I've learned. You simply can't write a long manuscript, fiction or nonfiction, without some prior planning. You've got to know where you're going and how to get there.
Happy trails.
I agree with everything you said, Swu. However, I'm worried about your current free for all. That's sort of what mine was...knew where I was going, how to get there, but stumbled in the end with not enough conflict and too many words.
Caution is in order.
Cut, cut, and cut. Heavy line editing helps a lot, especially of redundant passages in which you have "fallen in love" with your words or skill at saying something six different "beautiful" ways!
And I agree: know where you're going or you will write yourself into a corner. My own favorite YA action-adventure novel MS lies unfinished, because I could never write the final chapter. Wish I would have fleshed that out FIRST! I'm SO bad at writing battle scenes, lol.... but it's required by the plot!
Ooh, ooh, Lynda! An idea for another post...action and battle scenes.
We'll get that novel of yours done yet, and mine, as well.
Thanks for dropping by.
I have just shared a little of mine on my blog, and gained a few positive emails and comments. What I love about this is that I have been offered advice on things various and am now playing around with my wip.
I had the ending before I had written a word, so I planned around that. A note pad with a multitude of ideas sits alongside my laptop, as do napkins, till receipts etc.
I have learned so much from other writers/bloggers that when I get to book 2, I will be far more prepared.
Interesting post, thanks for sharing.
I've never used a storyboard but I do do a brief 2 page outline beforehand. It's been working for me so far.
I usually plan mine out, although not extensively. I don't have a set number of words per chapter, but prefer to end the chapter when it feels right. Guess I'm more of a panster in that respect.
Helen
Straight From Hel
My difficulty has always been the great rush of excitement of starting a new work. But whenever I plunge into the new novel pool, unless I use the steps, I find myself in over my head.
Great post, Kathy, very thought provoking.
What a great post! Here is how I write: I know several major plot points, and have a general idea of how the story will end. I write to meet each point. Example: MC needs reason to leave school by first 1/3 of book, so I gradually turn entire student body against her.
Now, with my WIP, I knew the end. And just when I got to it, it totally changed--for the better. That's the funny thing with writing for me. It takes on its own life.
Love your blog!
Whether a panster, a plotter, or a partier (oooh, this is fun!), as long as we finish and feel good, I guess that meets the goal, Helen.
And you're right, a chapter shouldn't have a fixed number of pages, but I've found that authors tend to have patterns, some write short, fast scenes, others, more leisurely, longer chapters. Variety of course improves all.
Glynis, I visited your blog the other day and forgot to reply here! Your writing is descriptive and paints such a vivid setting. Good luck with it, and thanks for dropping in to have words with me.
Jennifer,
I'll bet that two page outline has a lot of mulling behind it.
Some people can work from the bones and fill out the body, others need a bit more muscle and grit to go from.
The novel pool plunge! What a wonderful analogy, Conda.
We might stretch it, comparing those who use the steps to those who do swan dives from twenty feet to the occasional belly flop and/or the "lifeguard fast entrance" where they always keep their head above water while getting in fast.
Oooh, must be getting late here!
Thank you Kathy for your supportive words. I have removed my work now on the advice of others, sue to the chance of plagiarism. Thanks again for boosting my ego :0
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